I thought Steiner wrote a very well organized essay on the subject of college depression. Her thesis was very clear, in my opinion, that students should always seek help from a counselor if they are feeling all the stress being thrown onto them. The way she supported her thesis made me realize that depression is a very real thing and it can happen to anyone, even people who seem to have everything.
I liked how much information she gave in her essay. She gave an in-depth explanation of what depression is, what the symptoms were, and what the consequences and effects are. I'm glad she included where to seek help in her essay, as many students reading this would probably need that information.
I can definitely relate to this article because I felt very overwhelmed with stress when school first started. I eventually got over it by going to my older friends who have been in college for a few years and asking them how to handle everything in an easy way. If I didn't have my friends, I probably would have had a breakdown by now.
If I were to write an essay on this topic, I don't think I would change the format very much. I thought Steiner's essay was written very well and was easy to understand. I would also include examples of real people (If i had any examples) and explain the most important points about depression.
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